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CA - Smalltalk - JohnCooperWorks - 01.11.2005
Astrid schrieb:na wenn er gut gepflegt is sieht man dann eh keine bissspuren!
hmm lecka ich freu mich schon...
oooh gott... und ich muss noch soooooooooooooooooo lange drauf warten *stöhn* und dann ists net mal sicher
weisst eh, sicher is nix
und "nix is fix" wies schon der Reini gsungen hat.. alles ist möglich-aber nix is fix
CA - Smalltalk - Astrid - 01.11.2005
JohnCooperWorks schrieb:weisst eh, sicher is nixnaja aber vergessen tu i des net! des forder i scho ein von dir gelle! also drum herum kommen wirst net! also immer brav waschen vor jedem treffen
alles ist möglich-aber nix is fix
CA - Smalltalk - uwe_sternlitz - 01.11.2005
Astrid schrieb:sag mal markus?
was würdest du denn über löwen schreiben.. wo einer aus dem ring ausgeborchen is und panik verursacht hat...
bzw... wenn i schreiben will... Gott sei dank war der Löwe nicht bösartig, trotzdem gelang es der Circu stuff ihn anfangs nicht einzufangen. Es dauerte 7 minuten bis er wieder im Ring war.
na findest du das nicht ein wenig langweilig?
"After the break, the lionshow was next. Suddenly two sticks of the cage broke, after the lion, falling backwards due to a heavy whiplash by the tamer, crashed against it. One huge male lion used the hole in the cage to escape. The audience was immediatly in panic. Everybody was trying to get out of the tent. The lion jumped into the people and snaped after a little girl, who was stuck in the crowd. When the Circusstaff finally shot at the lion, it was already too late. The girl's left arm was riped off. She was bleeding heavyly (<-- schreibt man das so?!). Thanks god, the ambulance which arrived 15 minuites later could stop the bleeding and save her life."
ich find die version spannender
markus
CA - Smalltalk - Astrid - 01.11.2005
uwe_sternlitz schrieb:na findest du das nicht ein wenig langweilig?spannender schon.. aber der text darf nur 200 worte haben.... ich muss das uuuuuuuuuuur kürzen.. ich hab erm jetzt zammgeschrieben.. es sind aber noch immer 244 oder so
"After the break, the lionshow was next. Suddenly two sticks of the cage broke, after the lion, falling backwards due to a heavy whiplash by the tamer, crashed against it. One huge male lion used the hole in the cage to escape. The audience was immediatly in panic. Everybody was trying to get out of the tent. The lion jumped into the people and snaped after a little girl, who was stuck in the crowd. When the Circusstaff finally shot at the lion, it was already too late. The girl's left arm was riped off. She was bleeding heavyly (<-- schreibt man das so?!). Thanks god, the ambulance which arrived 15 minuites later could stop the bleeding and save her life."
ich find die version spannender
markus
CA - Smalltalk - Astrid - 01.11.2005
heavyly wird heavily geschrieben!
CA - Smalltalk - uwe_sternlitz - 01.11.2005
na sag einfach dass du dich in deiner kreativität einfach nicht einschränken konntest
markus
CA - Smalltalk - Astrid - 01.11.2005
schau mal es muss vorkommen
- der preis is überhöht
- für nen trink bist ewig lang in der schlange gstanden, weil das service zu langsam war
- zu spät angefangen zu früh geendet
- löwe ausgebrochen
dann war da noch was.. hab ich aber schon wieder vergessen..
CA - Smalltalk - Astrid - 01.11.2005
uwe_sternlitz schrieb:na sag einfach dass du dich in deiner kreativität einfach nicht einschränken konntesthm was bringt ma das wenn i dann beim der großen cambridge zertifikat prüfung durchfall im schriftlichen teil, weil ich um 50 worte zuviel hab
markus
CA - Smalltalk - uwe_sternlitz - 01.11.2005
ach der text ist für eine prüfung - und du denkst du kommst mit einem bier davon?!
spaß bei seite... ist nicht wirklich leicht den text zu kürzen ohne dabei groß den sinn rauszunehmen. man könnte höchstens den text anders schreiben indem man nicht einzeln auf die acts eingeht.. mal sehen.
Dear Sir or Madam,
last weekend, my son and I visited your "Circus Maximus". It was my son's birthdaypresent, and so I accepted the expensive price for the tickets. "It will be worth all the money" I thought. After waiting for 20 minuites to get into the Circus, we were finally guided to our seats. I was pretty disappointed, when I saw that the seats we were brought to. They were in the back and also behind a tentmast. You can imagine, that my son was not happy about this. After another 20 minuites, the show began. Half an hour too late. My son had already finished is popcorn, bored while waiting for the show. So I bought a second bag of overpriced popcorn. "It's my son's birthdaypresent, don't forget it!", I said to myself.
Finally, the show began. The circusdirector's german was so bad and had such a heavy english accent, that it was almost impossible for my son to understand him. So I had to translate everything simultainiously. Then, the actos.. Clowns, not funny at all. The ponies: in a very bad condition. The dogshow: boring. But there was one really exciting act. After the break, the lionshow was next. Suddenly two sticks of the cage broke, after the lion, falling backwards due to a heavy whiplash by the tamer, crashed against it. One huge male lion used the hole in the cage to escape. The audience was immediatly in panic. Everybody was trying to get out of the tent. The lion jumped into the people and snaped after a little girl, who was stuck in the crowd. When the Circusstaff finally shot at the lion, it was already too late. The girl's left arm was riped off. She was bleeding heavily. Thanks god, the ambulance which arrived 15 minuites later could stop the bleeding and save her life
If I sum up everything, I've to say that the shown things were definitly inadequate if you look at your prices. Take this letter as a base for improvements on your ticket pricing or on the actors.
Regards,
Astrid
jetzt ist es schon etwas gekürzt und die gute löwenäääktschn ist auch noch drinne
markus
CA - Smalltalk - Astrid - 01.11.2005
uwe_sternlitz schrieb:ach der text ist für eine prüfung - und du denkst du kommst mit einem bier davon?!ohne hallo und grüße 344 wörter um 144 zu viel
spaß bei seite... ist nicht wirklich leicht den text zu kürzen ohne dabei groß den sinn rauszunehmen. man könnte höchstens den text anders schreiben indem man nicht einzeln auf die acts eingeht.. mal sehen.
Dear Sir or Madam,
last weekend, my son and I visited your "Circus Maximus". It was my son's birthdaypresent, and so I accepted the expensive price for the tickets. "It will be worth all the money" I thought. After waiting for 20 minuites to get into the Circus, we were finally guided to our seats. I was pretty disappointed, when I saw that the seats we were brought to. They were in the back and also behind a tentmast. You can imagine, that my son was not happy about this. After another 20 minuites, the show began. Half an hour too late. My son had already finished is popcorn, bored while waiting for the show. So I bought a second bag of overpriced popcorn. "It's my son's birthdaypresent, don't forget it!", I said to myself.
Finally, the show began. The circusdirector's german was so bad and had such a heavy english accent, that it was almost impossible for my son to understand him. So I had to translate everything simultainiously. Then, the actos.. Clowns, not funny at all. The ponies: in a very bad condition. The dogshow: boring. But there was one really exciting act. After the break, the lionshow was next. Suddenly two sticks of the cage broke, after the lion, falling backwards due to a heavy whiplash by the tamer, crashed against it. One huge male lion used the hole in the cage to escape. The audience was immediatly in panic. Everybody was trying to get out of the tent. The lion jumped into the people and snaped after a little girl, who was stuck in the crowd. When the Circusstaff finally shot at the lion, it was already too late. The girl's left arm was riped off. She was bleeding heavily. Thanks god, the ambulance which arrived 15 minuites later could stop the bleeding and save her life
If I sum up everything, I've to say that the shown things were definitly inadequate if you look at your prices. Take this letter as a base for improvements on your ticket pricing or on the actors.
Regards,
Astrid
jetzt ist es schon etwas gekürzt und die gute löwenäääktschn ist auch noch drinne
markus
nein der text is eine vorbereitung für eine prüfung