[Astrid]

na findest du das nicht ein wenig langweilig?
"After the break, the lionshow was next. Suddenly two sticks of the cage broke, after the lion, falling backwards due to a heavy whiplash by the tamer, crashed against it. One huge male lion used the hole in the cage to escape. The audience was immediatly in panic. Everybody was trying to get out of the tent. The lion jumped into the people and snaped after a little girl, who was stuck in the crowd. When the Circusstaff finally shot at the lion, it was already too late. The girl's left arm was riped off. She was bleeding heavyly (<-- schreibt man das so?!). Thanks god, the ambulance which arrived 15 minuites later could stop the bleeding and save her life."

ich find die version spannender

markus

spannender schon.. aber der text darf nur 200 worte haben.... ich muss das uuuuuuuuuuur kürzen.. ich hab erm jetzt zammgeschrieben.. es sind aber noch immer 244 oder so